The table below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009.
The table demonstrated the wages of
teachers
in high school
of
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in
five
countries
in 2009. The
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Luxembourg
shows the highest when the
Australia is the Correct article usage
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lowerest
. For the time to reach the maximum salary, Correct your spelling
lowest
Japan
and Denmark
takes
the largest and smallest numbers of Change the verb form
take
years
respectively among the five
countries
.
Concerning the amount of money, high school
teachers
in Luxembourg
receive more than other countries
for both starting and 15 year
after.The Change to a plural noun
years
teachers
there receive 80000 dollars
since they work in secondary school
and it turns to 119000 dollars
after 15 years
. It is
increased by around 49%. For the second Verb problem
has
hightest
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highest
countries
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country
Denmark
, teachers
start with receiving 45000 dollars
. They will recieve
54000 after 15 Correct your spelling
receive
years
. The percentage increased is about 20%. For the Asian countries
, the amount of salaries
in Japan
and Korea are close. In Japan
, the salaries
of secondary school
teachers
are
nearly doubled when they Unnecessary verb
apply
recieved
34000 Correct your spelling
received
dollars
at the beginning and 65000 dollars
after 15 years
. In Korea, teachers
starts
with 30000 Change the verb form
start
dollars
salaries
, which is slightly lower than that of Change preposition
in salaries
Japan
. It increases for
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by
dollars
after 15 years
. For the lowerest
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lowest
salaries
country, Australia only starts with 28000 dollars
from the beginning. However
, the
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school
teachers
can receive 48000 dollar
after 15 Change to a plural noun
dollars
years
. The increase of
percentage is around 70%. It shows that the wages of secondary Change preposition
in
school
teachers
in most of these five
countries
increase for
more than 50% after 15 Change preposition
by
years
, except Denmark
, only 20%.Meanwhile,among these five
countries
, teachers
in Luxembourg
paid the highest when
the Australia paid the Rephrase
apply
lowerest
.
As for the number of Correct your spelling
lowest
years
needed to attain the maximum salary, Japan
and Denmark
takes
the largest and smallest numbers of Verb problem
have
years
respectively among five
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the five
countries
. Secondary school
teachers
in Luxembourg
, Japan
and Korea reach it around 30 to 40 years
. It takes the longest time for teachers
in Japan
. It requires 37 years
. Austrlia
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Australia
Denmark
takes
about 10 Change the verb form
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years
, when
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while
Denmark
only requires 8 years
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