The bar charts illustrate the average years of schooling, scientists and technicians per 1000 people and also the participation levels in research and development in developing and industrialised countries during 1980 and 1990.
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The three bar charts illustrate the average
years
of schooling, the number of scientist
and technicians, and money spent on research and development between developing and industrialised Fix the agreement mistake
scientists
countries
in 10 years
period Correct your spelling
10-year
start
from 1980.
For the number of Change the form of the verb
starting
years
for schooling, the developed spent approximately 8.5 hours
in 1980. Meanwhile, developing countries
who
only finished their school for Correct pronoun usage
apply
Correct article usage
an averagely
averagely
Change the word
average
2.5
Change preposition
of 2.5
hours
. By 1990, the hours
of studying have been increased estimately
around two Correct your spelling
estimated
estimate
hours
for industrialised countries
. while
on the other hand
, developing countries
schooling Change noun form
countries'
country's
hours
just increade
by 0.5 Correct your spelling
increased
hours
.
The numbers
of scientists and technicians in developing Fix the agreement mistake
number
countries
were
far less than Correct subject-verb agreement
was
developed
Change preposition
in developed
countries
. In 1980, the expert
in developing Fix the agreement mistake
number of experts
countries
was just 10 people out of 100 and gradually increased until it has
reached around 15 Unnecessary verb
apply
until
scientists. For the advanced Change preposition
apply
countries
, their experts have fast increased in the years
where in 1980 It only stareted
with approximately around 40 people out of 100 and now they Correct your spelling
started
has
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
techinican
which has past 10 Correct your spelling
technicians
person
per million. Money spent doing Research and development in 1980 Change to a plural noun
people
were
only $150 dollars and by 1990 it Change the verb form
was
have
been Change the verb form
has
increase
by 200 billion.Change the verb form
increasing
increased
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