The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
The bar chart underneath compares how much
France
and the UK
had spent on cars, computer
, books, perfume and cameras in the year 2010. The values are expressed in pound sterling.
Fix the agreement mistake
computers
Overall
, it can be inferred that apart from computers and perfume, the UK
invested more capital on rest
of the goods than Correct article usage
the rest
France
. Both the nations spent most of their money on cars whereas
the least sum was given
Verb problem
spent
for
perfumes.
In 2010, a little more than 450,000 Change preposition
on
pounds
sterling was spent on cars by
the Change preposition
in
UK
, while
France
invested approximately 50,000 pounds
sterling less than the former. Following
this
, the expenditure on books counted around 300,000 and 400,000 pounds
sterling for France
and the UK
, respectively.
Capital enculcated on purchase
of cameras clocked somewhere near 350,000 Correct article usage
the purchase
pounds
sterling whereas
France
shockingly spent approximately 2 times lesser
than the previous value. Computers stood out to be the second highest grosser for Correct word choice
less
France
amounting near 0.4 million pounds
, alternatively
the other nation clocked Add a comma
alternatively,
aprroximately
25,000 Correct your spelling
approximately
pounds
less than the former.Submitted by mrigankingley2099 on
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