The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
The bar chart underneath compares how much
France
and the Use synonyms
UK
had spent on cars, Use synonyms
computer
, books, perfume and cameras in the year 2010. The values are expressed in pound sterling.
Fix the agreement mistake
computers
Overall
, it can be inferred that apart from computers and perfume, the Linking Words
UK
invested more capital on Use synonyms
rest
of the goods than Correct article usage
the rest
France
. Both the nations spent most of their money on cars Use synonyms
whereas
the least sum was Linking Words
given
Verb problem
spent
for
perfumes.
In 2010, a little more than 450,000 Change preposition
on
pounds
sterling was spent on cars Use synonyms
by
the Change preposition
in
UK
, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
France
invested approximately 50,000 Use synonyms
pounds
sterling less than the former. Use synonyms
Following
Linking Words
this
, the expenditure on books counted around 300,000 and 400,000 Linking Words
pounds
sterling for Use synonyms
France
and the Use synonyms
UK
, respectively.
Capital enculcated on Use synonyms
purchase
of cameras clocked somewhere near 350,000 Correct article usage
the purchase
pounds
sterling Use synonyms
whereas
Linking Words
France
shockingly spent approximately 2 times Use synonyms
lesser
than the previous value. Computers stood out to be the second highest grosser for Correct word choice
less
France
amounting near 0.4 million Use synonyms
pounds
, Use synonyms
alternatively
the other nation clocked Add a comma
alternatively,
aprroximately
25,000 Correct your spelling
approximately
pounds
less than the former.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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