62.Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Disucuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some say that
publicity
is victorious at convincing
people
to purchase products,
while
others would argue that there are too many
announcements
that
people
do not pay attention to.
This
essay would argue that
although
sometimes advertisements are very interesting,
people
are able to skip them. On the one hand, there are many ways in which companies can upload
announcements
. Nowadays, they will investigate the market and do all the necessary work to make sure about what the consumers are looking for, so they can make the perfect advertisement to catch consumers’ attention,
therefore
,
people
will be persuaded to buy the product.
For example
, there are many furniture companies which will make the advertising not look like
publicity
, but like a story, so
people
will finish watching the
video
, which
causes
an increase in sales of their products.
However
, I believe that the quantity of
announcements
should be regulated, since if there are too many,
then
, will cause negative effects.
On the other hand
, because of the increasing number of
people
using social media, social media companies decided to add the possibility of uploading advertisements on their applications, causing most
people
are watch many
announcements
every day,
this
publicity
blocks and stops individuals from what they were doing, and
this
causes
anger to
people
who are watching the
video
.
For instance
, watching a Youtube
video
normally there are two or three 15 seconds
announcements
and when the next
video
is going to be played, there is another
publicity
,
people
in
this
period of time, will not watch the advertisement,
instead
, they may go for a cup of coffee and
then
come back. I believe that
this
is because of the excessive amount of advertising, which
causes
people
to not want to watch any more. In conclusion,
although
advertising in the correct way can lead to higher sales of products, the large amount of
announcements
that there are in
people
’s daily lives,
causes
them to stop watching them and not paying attention.
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