63.In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is argued that in the future
people
will watch news
and books
on the Internet
, so they do not need to waste money buying printed ones. This
essay will completely disagree with this
statement because the main reason why people
stop using paper
products is because of the reduction of forests and because it is easier to look for information on the Internet
.
People
now give a lot of importance to the protection of the environment, trying to avoid anything that can damage nature. Since paper
comes from trees, and millions of tonnes of paper
is used every year, a lot of trees need to be cut down. Furthermore
, since everyone has a phone, individuals
can watch news
and books
through mobile phones, so the amount of paper
used for books
and newspapers can be reduced. For instance
, in many schools in Spain they are starting to use websites and applications, where students can watch the textbooks directly through the computer, of course, they continue to need to pay for it.
Websites are easier to use, this
is because, people
are able to find news
from years ago very quickly, or directly search about something that they are interested in, and information related will directly appear. Also
, individuals
can save their reading books
on the application and read them again when they want, in this
way they reduce the space at home used for books
, and they can use it for other things. For example
, China has many applications where individuals
can read different types of books
, and around 60% of people
that read physical books
, opted to read online, because they did not need to carry books
from one place to another.
In conclusion, individuals
in the future will prefer using online books
and watching the news
on the Internet
because it can reduce the disappearance of forests and it is simpler and quicker, but it is not because people
are not willing to pay for these products, since they still need to pay for watching these sources on the Internet
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