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65.Some people think governments should spend money in looking for life on other planets, while others think that here are many unsolved problems on earth. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Some say that the government should use their funds in searching for
life
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 on other
planets
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 others would argue that there are too many difficulties on Earth that are still not solved.
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 essay would argue that
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 finding
life
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 on other
planets
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 will let people know if individuals can live in other places, there are more important issues that should be solved on the planet. On the one hand, by looking for
life
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 on other
planets
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, people are able to know if there are any other places where human beings can live . So if in the future a huge
problem
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 happens, individuals have the option to go to other
planets
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 and live there. A large amount of money is needed for doing
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 research since are complicated and long-term project, so if the government support these activities, issues related to money will be solved.
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, it took many years, for experts to find water on other
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, of course, continuous study needs to be carried out since there are still many questions that need to be answered and solved.
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, I believe, that
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 is not an urgent
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, and the government should support the difficulties that the earth is already facing.
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, there are many
problems
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 that humans are suffering, and these are more important because people’s lives may be in danger. Global warming, contamination and greenhouse gases are being an increasing
problem
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. Scientists and other experts have been trying to find solutions for these catastrophes, and some of them have been carried out, but they can only solve part of the
problem
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. If these
problems
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 are not solved, individuals will have
life
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 danger, since these issues can cause health
problems
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. Recent research concluded that, because of the growing amount of air pollution in the cities, more and more people are having respiratory
problems
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 and lung infections. In my opinion, the difficulties that the earth is facing now are very urgent and should be solved as quickly as possible. In conclusion,
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 looking for
life
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 signals on other
planets
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 can be a big discovery, is more important to solve complications that the planet has nowadays.
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