The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram provides data on the ratio of residents living in urban areas for

Philippines

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the Philippines

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, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia. The chart includes information for the time period between 1970 and 2020

as well as

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a prediction of the trend till the year 2040.

Overall

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the

percentage

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of people living in cities has experienced a huge rise between 1970 and 2020. The biggest

growth

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compared to the other three countries can be seen in Malaysia,

which

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whose

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percentage

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started at approximately 30 and ended up being bigger than 80.

Moreover

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, in each of these four countries, there was

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apply

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constant

growth

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during

this

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period. The only country that hasn't experienced constant

growth

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was

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the Philippines. Its

percentage

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fell from a bit less than 50 to circa 40 between 1990 and 2010.

However

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after

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this

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, the numbers raised back to approximately 45

percent

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per cent

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According to

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predictions, the upward trend will continue in the next 10 years.

However

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, in Thailand, the

percentage

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is expected to grow at a more rapid pace than in the other three countries. A much lower tempo of

growth

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was predicted for Malaysia.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, growth with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

183 words

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You should spend about 40 mins. Many people think that mobile phones should be banned in public places such as libraries, shops and public transport. Do you agree or disagree?

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