The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2015 and present day.

The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2015 and present day.
The pictures illustrate the development on the ground floor of an art
gallery
between 2015 and the present day. Over the period, the ground floor of the art
gallery
witnessed dramatic modernizations, with changes in the layout and some new amenities added,
while
the main
exhibition
room remained to enhance visitor’s experience. At the top of the art
gallery
, there is a new lift constructed next to the stairs to serve visitor’s demands.
Whereas
, the Cafe shop was completely demolished to make way for the
gallery
office relocated. The empty place that the
Gallery
Office left behind is set up to locate a new Vending Machine. The original
Exhibition
Room 4 was converted to a small Temporary
Exhibition
and Children’s area,
while
the Receptionist was relocated to near the Entrance and next to the Temporary
Exhibition
.
In contrast
, the main facilities including
Exhibition
Room from 1 to 3 and Stairs all stayed the same as in 2015.
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