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The pictures illustrate the development on the ground floor of an art

gallery

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between 2015 and the present day. Over the period, the ground floor of the art

gallery

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witnessed dramatic modernizations, with changes in the layout and some new amenities added,

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the main

exhibition

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room remained to enhance visitor’s experience. At the top of the art

gallery

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, there is a new lift constructed next to the stairs to serve visitor’s demands.

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, the Cafe shop was completely demolished to make way for the

gallery

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office relocated. The empty place that the

Gallery

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Office left behind is set up to locate a new Vending Machine. The original

Exhibition

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Room 4 was converted to a small Temporary

Exhibition

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and Children’s area,

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the Receptionist was relocated to near the Entrance and next to the Temporary

Exhibition

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In contrast

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, the main facilities including

Exhibition

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Room from 1 to 3 and Stairs all stayed the same as in 2015.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

157 words

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The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2015 and present day.

Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

these days , most of the students stay away from there homes when they are doing a degree course . Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand and what measure could governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?