The chart shows the sales of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014
The line graph illustrates the numbers request of five different
flavors
of jam namely, Strawberry,Raspberry, Grape,Cherry,and Plum between 2009 and 2014.
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flavours
Overall
, three kinds of flavour taste Grape, Raspberry and Fritz increased over the 6 years but Plum Linking Words
,was
steadily dropped to the lowest number in 2014 Verb problem
apply
while
, Cherry Linking Words
sales
number was unstable from 2009 to 2014.
Use synonyms
Firstly
, a Strawberry star Linking Words
with
above 3 in 2009 to peak the highest Change preposition
apply
sales
per cent by seven thousand, moving to the second kind the Raspberry under 3 Use synonyms
then
increased slightly to 5 and was stable to around 5 thousand to the Linking Words
last
year 2014.
Plam Linking Words
sales
began with the same number as Raspberry Use synonyms
sales
but , regularly declined to reach zero there was no inquiry for Palm Use synonyms
jam
in 2014.
The cherry aroma Capitalize word
Jam
was fluctuated
starting with close to two to around three in the Change to the active voice
fluctuated
has fluctuated
last
year 2014.
Noticed Grape rose dramatically from above zero to more than five.Linking Words
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