Poor nutrition and obesity is a problem in many developed countries and some people believe that a tax on fast food would reduce the problem. Do you agree?

Nowadays, a lot of

people

are consuming a great amount of fast

food

due to

some reasons.

Thus

, many countries are facing the

problem

of unhealthy

food

and being obese. And some

people

think that collecting taxes on fast

food

would help solve the issue. From my point of view, I partly agree with

this

statement since there are more effective ways to confront

this

problem

.

Initially

, the rise

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the obesity rate is related to the use of fast

food

. It is undebatable that some

people

choose to eat fast

food

because of its cheap price. So as to confront

this

problem

, a vital way is taxing

on

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fast

food

and making it quite far-reached to some consumers.

However

,

this

method could perhaps be effective for only the poor,

while

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the rich who are attracted by its

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, they would still pay more coins to eat fast

food

.

Hence

, the rate of obesity can decrease to a certain level but not much.

Moreover

, lack of nutrition and getting fat are not only caused by fast

food

but

also

by

people

. A lot of

people

get overweight because of their laziness and carelessness for themselves. They choose to eat unhealthy

food

and tend to sit in one place all the time which will lead to obesity. To handle

this

,

people

should be encouraged to eat more vegetables and organic products. They should work out regularly to release the energy that they maintain

while

eating.

To sum up

, a tax on fast

food

would help reduce the

problem

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nutrition and keeping fit.

However

, I think it is more crucial to encourage

people

to take up healthy habits to gain a better lifestyle.