The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts give information about a museum plan in 1998 and after some
ubgrades
that were made in 2008.
Looking from an Correct your spelling
upgrades
overall
perspective, over the span of 10 years, it can be seen that the garden and the cafe stayed untouched. What is more, the restaurant was added in 2008.
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Accroding
to the materials, it can be seen that the permanent exhibition room that Correct your spelling
According
were
located in the upper left corner was replaced with the restaurant in 1998. It is Change the verb form
was
also
worth mentioning that in 1998 the temporary exhibition room was Linking Words
in
the bottom of the building, but Change preposition
at
then
, in 2008, it was next to the restaurant. The garden which was in the centre of the museum had been filled with the cafe sitting area and the fountains by 2008.
As can be seen from the data, the Linking Words
tickets
entrance and the exit stayed in place, but the shop had been moved to the bottom right corner by 2008. Change the noun form
ticket
Moreover
, the bags and coats had become on the right of the store.Linking Words
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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