Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sport facilities. Other, however, say that this would have limit effect on public health and that other measure are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are arguments about whether the best idea to improve public

health

is by creating more

sports

facilities;

whereas

other people believe

that is

not sufficient enough to make a significant impact. From my standpoint, I agree with the latter viewpoint because there are amount of individuals who cannot afford to go to the

sports

station and there is another way to improve the quality of

health

. On the one hand, it could be accepted that

sports

facilities support all ages to improve their well-being.

In these

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places provide tools

such

as

gyms

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equipment and

also

personal trainers to explain and give motivation and create

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based on what we need.

Nonetheless

, the payment to gain all of

this

should not be overlooked because renting a place for practice and hiring a constructor may lead to high prices.

For instance

, I did some interviews at the gymnasium in Medan, Indonesia, and 63% who have

gym’s

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membership say the price is extremely expensive for those who do not have a stable job yet.

On the other hand

, there are many activities to reach a healthy life without spending much

of

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pennies that

also

benefit the wellness of individuals. First of all, everyone could go jogging every morning before starting

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to train cardiovascular.

Moreover

, people

also

have to eat healthy food, like vegetables or fruits and try to avoid eating any fast food because it has harmful effects on the body.

For example

, a research paper from a lecturer at the University of Indonesia emphasizes that training the body before starting daily life is a great choice because it will extend people’s spirit during the day and can prevent any kind of infectious disease. In conclusion,

although

increasing the number of

sports

centres can lead to improved public

health

, I firmly believe that

this

would have little impact on community

health

and there are some ways which are more affordable and efficient to be done.