The bar charts illustrate the average years of schooling, scientists and technicians per 1000 people and also the participation levels in research and development in developing and industrialised countries during 1980 and 1990.

The bar charts illustrate the average years of schooling, scientists and technicians per 1000 people and also the participation levels in research and development in developing and industrialised countries during 1980 and 1990.
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The bar graphs compare the data regarding the mean
years
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of schooling, scientists and technicians per 1000 people, and expenditure on research and development measured USD billions, in emerging and developed
nations
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in 1980 and 1990.
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, only spending on research in developing
countries
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decreased
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other variables rose in a ten-year timeframe. The average amount of time spent studying at school in both
countries
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leveraged where emerging
nations
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had a slight increase from nearly above 2
years
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in 1980 to almost 4
years
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after a decade,
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industrialised
countries
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faced a more significant increase,
initially
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slightly above 8
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to above 10
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in 1990. Talking about the ratio of scientists and technicians, developed
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' ratio jumped from barely above 40 in the 80s to around 70 per 1000 people in the next decade.
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, the number of
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experts in the developing world remained under 20 with a mere increase in 1990.
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, the disparity in spending on research and development between developed and developing
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is very noticeable, with only under USD 100 billion spent in both
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by emerging
countries
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, in comparison with developed
nations
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' USD 150 billion expense in 1980 that dramatically rose to double that number in 1990.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words years, nations, countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar charts
  • average
  • schooling
  • scientists
  • technicians
  • participation
  • research and development
  • developing countries
  • industrialized countries
  • 1980
  • 1990
  • comparison
  • trends
  • differences
  • education
  • research levels
  • potential reasons
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