Tourism has become one of the leading source of revenue in many countries. Do the advantage of tourism outweight the disadvantage?

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in terms of

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the nation to grow economically. Despite that, it is

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a concern for environmental disruption.

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, in my perspective, it is advantageous to society. Yet the downside of it cannot be neglected. To commence with,

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tourism

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society and it has

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multiple

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, it has been proven extremely productive for the local people because they provide essential facilities to the

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to more income for them in order to provide financial help to their family.

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one of the

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behind generating more employment, which we can see in the different sectors

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as restaurant managers,

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guides and hotel managers.

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of rare tribal

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communities

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still exist and

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would be able to learn about the traditional and cultural things , afterwards , domestic people might get some international

finanical

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financial

aid, which

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assists

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them in terms of

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living standard.

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impact which cannot be denied.

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number of

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at

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any particular spot

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is the cause of

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rise in pollution, it can be either water , air or noise pollution and that will be harmful

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the environment and concern for the local community.

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might be

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contagious

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tourists.

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, in 2019 whole world was suffering from the pandemic just because of continuous travel of

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and most of the people lost their lives during that period because lack of effective vaccinations and several

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of the country's still struggling

with

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that

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.

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,

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is an indispensable source for the country to contribute

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their economy to make

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development in other areas

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example : Education , Health and Sports.

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, It has a dark side which needs attention, the brighter side of

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to overlook.