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The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or rain between 1970 and 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or rain between 1970 and 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The line chart depicts the mean number of commuters taking either
car
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,
bus
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 or
train
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 between the years 1970 and 2030 in the UK. It is clear from the graph that using
train
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 and
car
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 as the main means of commuting has increased throughout the years, but using the
bus
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 slightly declined as the years passed.
According to
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 what is shown, in 1970
car
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users
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 were about 5.5
million
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 commuters and starting from 1980 a dramatic increase was seen until the year 2000, and from 2010 to 2030 the expected
users
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 for cars will reach about 9
million
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users
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. The
train
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 seems to have a slight increase in
users
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 until the year 2000, and from 2000 to 2010 we see a plateau where the number of
users
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 neither increased nor decreased until we see a sharp inclination of
users
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 that might reach about 5
million
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 in 2030.
On the other hand
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,
bus
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 riders started with about 4
million
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users
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 in 1970 and a slight decline was seen until reaching its lowest with just 3
million
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users
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 in 2030.
To sum up
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, we could say that
car
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users
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 were the most in numbers in they keep on increasing,
while
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train
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 commuters were the lowest in 1970 and began to increase over time,
however
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,
bus
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users
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 started off with 4
million
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users
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 and declined over time reaching the lowest among the 3 categories with only 3
million
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users
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, bus, train, users, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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