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The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or rain between 1970 and 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or rain between 1970 and 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The line chart depicts the mean number of commuters taking either
car
,
bus
 or
train
 between the years 1970 and 2030 in the UK. It is clear from the graph that using
train
 and
car
 as the main means of commuting has increased throughout the years, but using the
bus
 slightly declined as the years passed.
According to
 what is shown, in 1970
car
users
 were about 5.5
million
 commuters and starting from 1980 a dramatic increase was seen until the year 2000, and from 2010 to 2030 the expected
users
 for cars will reach about 9
million
users
. The
train
 seems to have a slight increase in
users
 until the year 2000, and from 2000 to 2010 we see a plateau where the number of
users
 neither increased nor decreased until we see a sharp inclination of
users
 that might reach about 5
million
 in 2030.
On the other hand
,
bus
 riders started with about 4
million
users
 in 1970 and a slight decline was seen until reaching its lowest with just 3
million
users
 in 2030.
To sum up
, we could say that
car
users
 were the most in numbers in they keep on increasing,
while
train
 commuters were the lowest in 1970 and began to increase over time,
however
,
bus
users
 started off with 4
million
users
 and declined over time reaching the lowest among the 3 categories with only 3
million
users
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, bus, train, users, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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