The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008.
The pie charts
are given
information about the percentage of Wrong verb form
give
time
mature people
spent their time
on several activities in some countries in the years 1958 and 2008.
Overall
, it is clearly seen most people
in 1958 most likely spent their activities working and sleeping, while
in 2008 the
similar things occurred though in different proportions of percentage.
Correct article usage
apply
To begin
with, in 1958 folks spared their almost half a day into two things, which are working (33%) and sleeping (32%). Besides
, they hang out with friends or family though not frequently, only 19%. Moreover
, relaxing at home, traveling
to work, and doing sports were below 10%, which can be said not Change the spelling
travelling
as
the priority for some Change preposition
apply
people
.
Move
to 2008, adults still gave their priority Wrong verb form
Moving
time
to working and sleeping. Nevertheless
, there is a significant increase in the working percentage, which is up to 42% than
previously, yet the sleeping Correct quantifier usage
more than
time
decreases to 25% than
the previous one. Correct quantifier usage
more than
Furthermore
, there is a specific rise in the number of people
relaxing at home as well as
doing exercise although
hanging out time
proportionally is getting lower to 6%.Submitted by zefanyagyu on
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