Many of today’s most urgent problems can only be solved through international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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world
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to be solved wisely. I
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completely
agree that some of those
problems
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an
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international cooperation to be
tackeled
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tackled
. Some of the issues that
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facing
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our planet nowadays ,are not an issue for one
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country
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countries
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,to solve
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it
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all the
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international
communities
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needs
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to be
invoved
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involved
in the solution. For
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instance
, if one country
tried
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to reduce wasting materials to solve the environmental crisis ,
while
other
countries
are increasing environmental damage, the
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is not going to be satisfying. critical planet
problems
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to be solved in all
countries
at the same time for
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outcome.
Furthermore
, some poor
countries
can not solve
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serious
problems
without financial support from developed
countries
. during covid
for example
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a lot
of developing
countries
had no
fund
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to bring covid
vaccine
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vaccines
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to stop the
virous
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virus
to spread
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. international cooperation helped poor people to get the vaccine and help their lives. without financial cooperation between
countries
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some
problems
will affect poor communities. in conclusion,I strongly
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agree
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thet
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that
international communities need to work to
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get
to help
poor
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the poor
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country
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countries
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,
also
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to find
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solution
for
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global
problems
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