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Telling the truth at all times is not essential. On some occasions it is necessary to tell lies, and it is wrong to tell the truth. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In some situations,
people
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 have to find some lies to cover the
truth
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. It is not necessary to tell the
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 at all times.
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 essay totally disagrees with
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 idea because honesty is an important value to build healthy relationships and telling lies
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only
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 to
manupulate
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manipulate
 the
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.
People
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 are bound to make relationships;
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, honesty is a crucial moral to improve healthy relationships. In a relationship, most
people
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 want to be honest with
others
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 because it is much more convenient and natural to be crystal clear in all situations.
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 convenience assists
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 other
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's expectations and emotions throughout the friendship. To illustrate
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 there is a belief that only
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true
friends
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 tell the facts which makes these
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friends
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 priceless. Eventually,
friends
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 can be honest with each other without hesitation to improve their friendship in a positive way. Telling lies to cover the
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, or to delay them is only cheating
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others
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.
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 kind of action only helps to
manupulate
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manipulate
 the facts in order to hide important information which is really inappropriate behaviour. Those
people
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 who prefer to lie
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others
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to others
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 not only hide the
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 but
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 disrespect their
friends
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, partners, and families.
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, telling lies about the exam results in high school is really popular in European countries.
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 behaviour
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 a little time for students to delay the real grades, their actual results will
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appear
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 of
a
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 day. In conclusion, honesty is a significant value to
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seamless
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relationship
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 and abusing
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 value to delay or cover the
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 only means
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manipulation
. Ultimately, I believe
people
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 share only the reality
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others
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,
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 and do not try to
manupulate
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manipulate
 their
friends
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 and families.

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Your opinion

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ethical dilemmas
  • justifiable deceit
  • white lies
  • social etiquette
  • unwavering honesty
  • compromised integrity
  • trustworthiness
  • contextual nuances
  • moral imperatives
  • psychological ramifications
  • pragmatic approach
  • consequential outcomes
  • fabrication
  • veracity
  • transparency
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