The first chart bellow shows how energy is used in average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

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The pie charts illustrate the proportions of

energy

used by households and

gas

emissions

produced by greenhouses using the

energy

Overall

, Australian households utilise most of their

energy

both on heating and water heating which results in the biggest percentage of

gas

emissions

. Looking into details, almost half of heating is used by Australian households, which is the highest followed by water heating with a quarter.

However

, the figure for water heating spends less

energy

than heating, it significantly contributes most of the greenhouse

emissions

at 32%,

while

heating causes only 15%.

In contrast

, both lighting and cooling utilise the least

energy

which is used, just only 4% and 2% respectively. They

also

produce under ten of

gas

emissions

, with 8% for lighting and only 3% for cooling.

Nevertheless

, the figure for other appliances even used just 15 %, but

then

it causes more than double

gas

emissions

, with 28%.

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