Some people think that studying online is more effective than studying on campus. What are the advantages and disadvantages of online study?

Use synonyms

College

Change the article

A college

show examples

is a place for

students

Use synonyms

to learn based on their major after finishing

highschool

Correct your spelling

high school

show examples

. The purpose of

college

Use synonyms

is to gain knowledge and build

base

Add an article

a base

the base

show examples

of thinking

of

Change preposition

for

show examples

the

students

Use synonyms

. For some

students

Use synonyms

, studying online is more effective to learn rather than going on to campus. I partly disagree with

this

Linking Words

opinion, but I will discuss both sides of the argument. There are many

advantages

Use synonyms

of studying online, one of them is the flexibility of the student to learn at anywhere

on

Change preposition

apply

show examples

their own pace and schedule their classes based on their convenience. Many

students

Use synonyms

agree that online

study

Use synonyms

are providing

Wrong verb form

provides

show examples

easy access

with

Change preposition

to

show examples

a wide range of resources.

For instance

Linking Words

, e-books, research articles, and educational videos. Other than that, studying online is more effective and efficient rather than in

college

Use synonyms

. There are no additional expenses

on

Change preposition

for

show examples

accomodation

Correct your spelling

accommodation

, dining out, etc.

On the other hand

Linking Words

, studying online

are having

Wrong verb form

has

show examples

many disadvantages,

such

Linking Words

as limited social interaction, technical difficulties, and other potential

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

distraction

Fix the agreement mistake

distractions

show examples

. Internet problem is the enemy of studying online as a

consequents

Fix the agreement mistake

consequence

show examples

of technical difficulties that can annoy

Use synonyms

students

Change noun form

students'

student's

show examples

focus.

Besides

Linking Words

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

that,

Use synonyms

study

Wrong verb form

studying

show examples

on

Change preposition

in

show examples

college

Use synonyms

is more supervised

for

Change preposition

by

show examples

teacher

Fix the agreement mistake

teachers

show examples

, so

students

Use synonyms

can gain more knowledge.

Use synonyms

Study

Wrong verb form

Studying

show examples

in

college

Use synonyms

also

Linking Words

have

Change the verb form

has

show examples

a

Remove the article

apply

show examples

better social interaction, more than

Use synonyms

study

Wrong verb form

studying

show examples

online.

Students

Use synonyms

can have

conversation

Fix the agreement mistake

conversations

show examples

and

connection

Fix the agreement mistake

connections

show examples

with

Linking Words

this

Correct determiner usage

these

show examples

advantages

Use synonyms

. In conclusion, there are many

advantages

Use synonyms

and disadvantages to

Use synonyms

study

Change the verb form

studying

show examples

in

college

Use synonyms

and online.

But

Correct word choice

However

show examples

I

had more prefer

Wrong verb form

preferred

show examples

to

study

Use synonyms

in

college

Use synonyms

because of the

advantages

Use synonyms

,

such

Linking Words

as connection build, supervised teacher, and

reduce

Wrong verb form

reduced

show examples

distraction potential.