The graph bellow shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2005.

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three museums between the

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2000 to 2005.

Overall

, the visitor numbers for MET and National increased across the reporting years

while

the visitor trend of Edo was varying. National Mesume in China had 6

million

times of visits annually in 2000 and steadily went up

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million

visitors

in the next 4 years and reached 11

million

at the year of 2004.

Finally

, in 2005, there was a significate jump of 5

million

visiting, from 11

million

to nearly 16

million

. Met Mesume in New York has a similar trend except the number of

visitors

was half in 2001, from 12

million

down to 6

million

. Afterwards, the visiting moved upward from 6

million

in 2001 to 14

million

at the end

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period, 2005. Edo Mesume in Tokyo had a V-shape trending. At the beginning of the 2 reporting periods, 2000 and 2001, the number of people who went to Edo was 14

million

in a year.

However

, the figure went down and reached the bottom of 6

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2003, afterwards the number of

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resumed and went up again to reach 10

million

.