The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented graph depicts the
number
of stores
that stopped working and the number
of new shops
that opened in a particular country in 2011 and 2018.
Overall
, both lines fluctuate during the 7-year period. Additionally
, the largest amount of shops
closed was in 2015, whereas
the largest amount of stores
added was in the year of 2018.
The opening of new shops
has seen a decline in growth since the start of 2011. At the beginning of 2011, 8500 new storms were admitted. Following the next year, it was approximately halved. After a couple of years, it skyrocketed to 6000 and declined to 4000 shops
in 2015.The new openings of shops
remained the same number
for the years 2015,2016 and 2017.
As a result
of the 7-year span, the number
of closures of various shops
approximated to 1000 at the end
of 2018. The substantial decrease in the closure of shops
happened in 2015, totalling nearly 500 stores
. From 2011 to 2014, the closure of the shops
slightly declined and increased by the end of 2013. The number
of stores
remained at nearly 5000 from 2016 to 2018.Submitted by hrushik2006 on
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