The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented graph depicts the
number
of Use synonyms
stores
that stopped working and the Use synonyms
number
of new Use synonyms
shops
that opened in a particular country in 2011 and 2018.
Use synonyms
Overall
, both lines fluctuate during the 7-year period. Linking Words
Additionally
, the largest amount of Linking Words
shops
closed was in 2015, Use synonyms
whereas
the largest amount of Linking Words
stores
added was in the year of 2018.
The opening of new Use synonyms
shops
has seen a decline in growth since the start of 2011. At the beginning of 2011, 8500 new storms were admitted. Following the next year, it was approximately halved. After a couple of years, it skyrocketed to 6000 and declined to 4000 Use synonyms
shops
in 2015.The new openings of Use synonyms
shops
remained the same Use synonyms
number
for the years 2015,2016 and 2017.
Use synonyms
As a result
of the 7-year span, the Linking Words
number
of closures of various Use synonyms
shops
approximated to 1000 Use synonyms
at the end
of 2018. The substantial decrease in the closure of Linking Words
shops
happened in 2015, totalling nearly 500 Use synonyms
stores
. From 2011 to 2014, the closure of the Use synonyms
shops
slightly declined and increased by the end of 2013. The Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
stores
remained at nearly 5000 from 2016 to 2018.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, stores, shops with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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