The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented graph depicts the
number
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of
stores
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that stopped working and the
number
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of new
shops
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that opened in a particular country in 2011 and 2018.
Overall
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, both lines fluctuate during the 7-year period.
Additionally
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, the largest amount of
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closed was in 2015,
whereas
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the largest amount of
stores
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added was in the year of 2018. The opening of new
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has seen a decline in growth since the start of 2011. At the beginning of 2011, 8500 new storms were admitted. Following the next year, it was approximately halved. After a couple of years, it skyrocketed to 6000 and declined to 4000
shops
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in 2015.The new openings of
shops
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remained the same
number
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for the years 2015,2016 and 2017.
As a result
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of the 7-year span, the
number
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of closures of various
shops
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approximated to 1000
at the end
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of 2018. The substantial decrease in the closure of
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happened in 2015, totalling nearly 500
stores
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. From 2011 to 2014, the closure of the
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slightly declined and increased by the end of 2013. The
number
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of
stores
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remained at nearly 5000 from 2016 to 2018.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, stores, shops with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • retail landscape
  • net growth
  • market dynamics
  • economic indicators
  • fluctuations
  • pivotal
  • consumption patterns
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • downward/upward trend
  • stabilize
  • recession
  • boom
  • retail sector
  • closure rate
  • inauguration/opening rate
  • consumer market
  • saturate
  • commercial viability
  • profitability
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