Currently, majority of people are willing to travel around the world to visit the sight seeying places because it is much more easier now as apposed to past. There are several benefits of tourism and there are outweigh the drawbacks.

A plethora of people travelling to the European countries to see the beautification of the world. The tourists are

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to different places because of too many

tourism

facilities available now.

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, the question is

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whether

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the benefits of

excursion

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the excursion

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are higher than

demerits

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the demerits

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or not

?

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would

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explain

further

. A large number of people are

making

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taking

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holidays

for

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to

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beautiful places because they

want

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feel

relax

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and enjoy

with

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themselves with

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their families.

Although

,

tourism

offers great opportunities for emerging economies and developing countries.

Besides

this

, it creates

jobs

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opportunities and

strengths

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the local infrastructure development and can help conserve the natural resources and assets of the

country

. To illustrate, in my

country

the government has provided facilities

to

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the

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tourists and

promote

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tourism

and making money from it.

Consequently

, it

generates

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19.5 billion dollars in 2021 to increase

GDP

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the GDP

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rate. If the government give extra facilities for travellers

then

it would benefit

for

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apply

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the economy of the nation. One of the most notable benefits of

tourism

is its ability to promote cultural exchange and understanding. Visitors to the

country

are exposed to a rich and diverse cultural heritage, which helps to promote a greater understanding and appreciation of different cultures.

Therefore

, it is possible to exchange cultures with different people and encourage their norms.

Furthermore

,

tourism

agencies

are

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are also motivated

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also

motivates for travellers to visit their local sites so they give economy packages. In a nutshell, tourists are preferred to travel

stunning

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to stunning

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sceneries and feel good because it is much easier to go anywhere. In my point of view,

tourism

has more advantages rather than disadvantages because it promotes the

country

's local traditions and

increase

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economic growth.