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Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends. Do you feel that this a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school?

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In
the
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modern society, more parents
provides
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for
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children
extra
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 classes after
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school and entire weekends. It is so controversial occasion
due to
 the other conditions.
However
, I tend to think that it is vital for youth to learn more than at school.
To begin
 with worthwhile of extra education we can claim that it is worth
for
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 the
child
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 future. What I mean here is that exploring new studies significantly affects
to
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intellectual opportunities to think quickly and suggest many meaningful ideas.
For instance
, the vast majority of China kids prefer
study
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whole
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the whole
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themselves
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time for
exam
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. Actually,
Chinese
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 exam is complicated for
average
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an average
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 student from
entire
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the entire
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 world which
is request
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high
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 level of intelligence.
As a result
, they take an examination on which life depends and deserves high scores in
exam
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.
On the other hand
, it is harmful
for
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a child
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child
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 body health
due to
 the fact brain overloading leads to burnout.
Furthermore
, taking up time during weekends results leisure shortage to spend time with friends. Take
for example
, there are numerous parents
which
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encourages
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 children to study hard and do not pay attention
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 any facilities.
Consequently
,
kid
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 obtains a couple of mental diseases that
difficult
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 to cure even with experts.
In addition
, it is
also
 essential to maintain
link
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 between kid and friends since friends positively
affects
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on
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mental health.
To sum up
 two opinions with the comparison, I can establish that it is still crucial to study whole your life.
However
, do not forget about other things which
includes
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 our lifestyle.
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