Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends. Do you feel that this a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school?
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the
modern society, more parents Correct article usage
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provides
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provide
for
children Change preposition
apply
extra
classes after Change preposition
with extra
the
school and entire weekends. It is so controversial occasion Correct article usage
apply
due to
the other conditions. However
, I tend to think that it is vital for youth to learn more than at school.
To begin
with worthwhile of extra education we can claim that it is worth for
the Correct pronoun usage
it for
child
future. What I mean here is that exploring new studies significantly affects Change noun form
child's
to
intellectual opportunities to think quickly and suggest many meaningful ideas. Change preposition
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For instance
, the vast majority of China kids prefer study
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to study
whole
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the whole
themselves
time for Correct pronoun usage
apply
exam
. Actually, Fix the agreement mistake
exams
Chinese
exam is complicated for Correct article usage
the Chinese
average
student from Add an article
an average
the average
entire
world which Add an article
the entire
an entire
is request
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requires
high
level of intelligence. Add an article
a high
As a result
, they take an examination on which life depends and deserves high scores in exam
.
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exams
On the other hand
, it is harmful for
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to
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a child
child
body health Change noun form
child's
due to
the fact brain overloading leads to burnout. Furthermore
, taking up time during weekends results leisure shortage to spend time with friends. Take for example
, there are numerous parents which
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who
encourages
children to study hard and do not pay attention Change the verb form
encourage
about
any facilities. Change preposition
to
Consequently
, kid
obtains a couple of mental diseases that Add an article
a kid
difficult
to cure even with experts. Add a missing verb
are difficult
In addition
, it is also
essential to maintain link
between kid and friends since friends positively Add an article
the link
a link
affects
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affect
on
mental health.
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To sum up
two opinions with the comparison, I can establish that it is still crucial to study whole your life. However
, do not forget about other things which includes
our lifestyle.Change the verb form
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