The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002.

The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002.
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bar graph, illustrations of the figured
incidents
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and
injuries
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in every 100 million commuter miles traveled by transportation modes which include commuter
rail
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, heavy
rail
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,
light
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rail
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,
bus
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, and demand response in the year 2002 are reflected.
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, the vast majority of
incidents
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and
injuries
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are seen in the demand response type of transportation. Noticeably, the commuter
rail
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is reported to have the least number of
incidents
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and
injuries
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per 100 million passenger miles
traveled
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the
light
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rail
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and the
bus
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had an equal number of
incidents
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, the
injuries
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for the
bus
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mode of transport were greater than for the
light
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rail
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.
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, riding on the
bus
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could cause more damage to passengers than using the
light
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rail
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. As for the heavy
rail
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, the incident showed 50 per 100 million PMT and the
injuries
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comprised 75% of the total
incidents
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.
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, the
incidents
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and the number of
injuries
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in the demand response should be addressed and solutions must be created to avoid
further
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damage to people.
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