The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002.

The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002.
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In
this
bar graph, illustrations of the figured
incidents
and
injuries
in every 100 million commuter miles traveled by transportation modes which include commuter
rail
, heavy
rail
,
light
rail
,
bus
, and demand response in the year 2002 are reflected.
Overall
, the vast majority of
incidents
and
injuries
are seen in the demand response type of transportation. Noticeably, the commuter
rail
is reported to have the least number of
incidents
and
injuries
per 100 million passenger miles
traveled
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.
While
the
light
rail
and the
bus
had an equal number of
incidents
, the
injuries
for the
bus
mode of transport were greater than for the
light
rail
.
Nevertheless
, riding on the
bus
could cause more damage to passengers than using the
light
rail
. As for the heavy
rail
, the incident showed 50 per 100 million PMT and the
injuries
comprised 75% of the total
incidents
.
Therefore
, the
incidents
and the number of
injuries
in the demand response should be addressed and solutions must be created to avoid
further
damage to people.
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