The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002.
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In
this
bar graph, illustrations of the figured incidents
and injuries
in every 100 million commuter miles traveled by transportation modes which include commuter rail
, heavy rail
, light
rail
, bus
, and demand response in the year 2002 are reflected. Overall
, the vast majority of incidents
and injuries
are seen in the demand response type of transportation.
Noticeably, the commuter rail
is reported to have the least number of incidents
and injuries
per 100 million passenger miles traveled
. Change the spelling
travelled
While
the light
rail
and the bus
had an equal number of incidents
, the injuries
for the bus
mode of transport were greater than for the light
rail
. Nevertheless
, riding on the bus
could cause more damage to passengers than using the light
rail
. As for the heavy rail
, the incident showed 50 per 100 million PMT and the injuries
comprised 75% of the total incidents
.
Therefore
, the incidents
and the number of injuries
in the demand response should be addressed and solutions must be created to avoid further
damage to people.Submitted by tiania_renerose on
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