The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000, there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.

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1888.

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2000 that number skyrocketed to 29

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. I strongly believe that other modes of transport should

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to

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society and

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cars

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by international law.

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vehicles

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everyone

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life easy.

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travelling system

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to the community.

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and ferries

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bicycle

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bicycles

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need to

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by the government. Through

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we can reduce toxic gas

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from

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vehicles

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environmental air pollution.

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example in China, they promote

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is

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main

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mode of travel.

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, every country can limit

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vehicle

ownership

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only

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automobile per family which can help to

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the number of

vehicles

on the road. it will be

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to reduce

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road traffic.

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,

international

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ruling system for

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comes

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to

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action.

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cars

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to another country.

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vehicle

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world to illustrate

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import

cars

from Japan to New Zealand.

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complience

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centre can not issue

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a registration

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for some

vehicle

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because it is not standard quality for New Zealand

road

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. But it

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by Japan. If, there is

one

policy around the world money and

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time

can be saved. In conclusion, I

stongly

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strongly

believe and agree that there must be different transport mode should

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to the community and

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one

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law for

ownership

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, import and export

vehicles

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of vehicles

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in the world. Through that we can

reduced

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the

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traffic jams, air pollution

as well as

buljary

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bulky

and

robery

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robbery

using

cars

.