You have seen an advertisement in the local newspaper for swimming lessons at your community sports centre. You want to find out more about the lessons. Write a letter to the manger of the sports centre. .Describe how well you can swim at the moment . Explain why you want to learn to swim better . Enquire about the time and cost of the swimming lessons
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing a letter to know about
new
classes for swimming in your Correct article usage
the new
center
.
Since I moved Change the spelling
centre
in
Change preposition
to
this
town I didn't
Verb problem
haven't
find
Wrong verb form
found
the
club of swimming. When your Correct article usage
a
add
displayed in the daily newspaper I Correct your spelling
ad is
deceided
to contact you. Correct your spelling
decided
Besides
this
, the classes are being conducting
near Change the verb form
are being conducted
are conducting
to
my home. Change preposition
apply
Although
, swimming is my favourite activity and I have experienced for
three years in my college.
I want to join again swimming classes because I forgot the techniques and Correct pronoun usage
it for
this
is a good time to improve skills
. Correct pronoun usage
my skills
Furthermore
, working a whole day in office
I feel tired and want some Correct article usage
the office
excerise
so swimming is the best option to end my day.
I request you to please send me details of the swimming course and Correct your spelling
exercise
cost
of membership monthly and yearly. If you tell me all information Correct article usage
the cost
then
I would like to join this
course as soon as possible.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,Submitted by mobinadurrani43 on
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Explain in more detail why swimming is the best option to end your day.
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