Some people think that the media (newspapers) have the right to publish details of people,s private life while others think it should be controlled. Discuss both views.
Some
people
think that the media
(newspapers) have the right to publish details of people
,s
private Correct your spelling
's
life
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lives
while
others think it should be controlled. Discuss both views.
In present
age, whether Add an article
the present
media
should provide details of individuals or it’s
must be controlled has sparked much debate. Some Unnecessary verb
it
people
assert that media
has to control what they post. Correct article usage
the media
Whereas
some others argue that it is birthright
to publish Add an article
the birthright
a birthright
people
information Change noun form
people's
that
is contain
their own private life. Personally, I am in favour of the first view.
Convincing arguments can be made that Change the verb form
contains
media
is double
sword edge, either in positive or negative ways. To start with, when Correct article usage
a double
newspaper
post any private details that Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
related
to any kind of business, Add a missing verb
are related
other competitor
will copy the Change the wording
another competitor
other competitors
achievement
of Fix the agreement mistake
achievements
success
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successful
people
which present unfear
challenge. Replace the word
presents an unfair
In other words
, one will be struggling and suffering in order to initiate projects. For instance
, Bitcoin has been selected as a valuable finance and it has a specific strategy to deal with, but if media
post the secret behind Correct article usage
the media
this
strategy, Bitcoin will be destroyed. Therefore
, Add an article
the honorable
honorable
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honourable
challenge
will co-exist.
Admittedly, setting rules and Fix the agreement mistake
challenges
get
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getting
controlled
of every single Replace the word
control
data
and information that Correct quantifier usage
piece of data
related
to Add a missing verb
is related
ones
, will provide more challenge and fair fighting. Fix the agreement mistake
one
However
, people
will be more comfortable and they will be no longer stressful
when it comes Replace the word
stressed
in
popular Change preposition
to
situation
. Fix the agreement mistake
situations
For example
, several different famous football players have a huge amount of distraction and disturbance, and the reason of
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for
that is
fans were
always Verb problem
apply
knowing
their locations and they start Wrong verb form
know
to
tracking them.
In summary, I would concede that Change preposition
apply
media
should stop Correct article usage
the media
provide
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providing
person
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people
information
and Change preposition
with information
government
should take a step Correct article usage
the government
about
these statements. Despite that, blocking and Change preposition
against
control
these bad habits will cause a beneficial result. Wrong verb form
controlling
Overall
, I am convinced that media
should be controlled.Submitted by khaleefalkhalaf on
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