Write about the following topic: Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the 20th century, the rich
is becoming
richer and the poor Wrong verb form
became
is becoming
poorer. Wrong verb form
became
This
gap
is becoming wider and every nation has a different approach to deal
with poor Wrong verb form
dealing
people
. What role should the governments of different countries play to help erase this
gap
? Further
, various reasons of
world poverty, and how the needy can be helped Change preposition
for
is
explained briefly in the subsequent paragraphs.
Needy and poor citizens in a country reflect the poverty and failure of Correct subject-verb agreement
are
legislature
in certain aspects. The elected party is chosen by the citizens, and it is their responsibility to look after its Add an article
the legislature
people
in hardships. Homeless and poor people
are dealt in
different ways in every nation. Some counterparts of Change preposition
with in
the
society believe they should be given respect Correct article usage
apply
while
others oppose it. To lay down an example, Canada, a developed nation has done a lot for the people
in need. From building shelters to providing meals and clothes to poor people
in
COVID-19 , the government fulfilled the basic requirements at that time. Change preposition
during
On the other hand
, maximum
number of deaths were reported in India during the pandemic, Change the article
a maximum
the maximum
due to
shortage
of oxygen cylinders and the rich Correct article usage
a shortage
people
were given preferance
as poor Correct your spelling
preference
people
were able to afford the oxygen cylinders sold at high prices.
Substantial reasons for world poverty begin when the public sectors
Fix the agreement mistake
sector
turn
into privatisation. Wealth dominators of the countries are given various benefits by the legislature and Correct subject-verb agreement
turns
therefore
they become more rich. To illustrate, privatisation in India is at peak
in Correct pronoun usage
its peak
todays
time. Railway sectors and factories which were once under the government are being privatised and given to Change noun form
today's
Ambani
and Adani Correct article usage
the Ambani
group
. What's moreFix the agreement mistake
groups
is
, these groups have more power than the President in India. Unnecessary verb
apply
In addition
, taxes
are layed
off in one or the other way for these groups but the farmers and other poor Correct your spelling
laid
played
people
are offered loans at a high rate of interest. Failure to pay the ROI lands them in deep trouble. What can be done to shorten the gap
is increase
the Fix the infinitive
to increase
taxes
for rich people
and lessen the taxes
for needy citizens as they do not have enough funds to pay these taxes
. More and more schemes and benefits should be given to these people
and the basic needs can be fulfilled by the ruling party.
To conclude
, the
poor Correct article usage
apply
people
have no respect in todays
time and the Change noun form
today's
gap
between rich and poor is widened with the involvement of governments. With some measures and imposition of high taxes
on rich people
, the tax money can be used to help this
needy population and the gap
can be shortened.Submitted by harshveermangat141 on
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