Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road saftey. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days the more cities make progress in the development process, the more the way citizens use vehicles becomes important.

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, it is argued by a group of people that the best

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for enhancing driving

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would be forcing all

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to take regular road

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for

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reasons.

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, some other individuals claim that only strict

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are effective and would prevent

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from driving in dangerous ways. In my opinion, a balanced

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would cover all issues here. To elaborate,

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cultural acts

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as regular

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courses

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are needed, strict

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which cause reckless

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costs would be a practical option that

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needed in some

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too. Generally,

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groups of people that emphasize

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and taking

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courses

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for bad driving and improving driving

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, have good intentions. They probably know that many road accidents that cause increasing death rates are mostly because of bad driving behaviour.

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, what

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groups fail to consider is that improving driving

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require

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cultural and practical act from the government. 

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fact, governors should realize that making improvement in driving

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need changes in social policies. They should go after social scientists and get their opinion on what is the best way of enhancing driving

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.

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, they should consider

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concept as an intersectional field which requires

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sociological review and law-related regulation. As a matter of fact, the best way to decrease bad and dangerous driving is to use a balanced

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that covers all issues that are neglected by each of those arguments solely. In conclusion, despite the fact that regular

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courses

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and strict

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both

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can be effective for reckless

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they are not enough if they do not complete each other. As I mentioned above, making improvements in driving

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need an intersectional and balanced

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by governments to make

drivers

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follow rules as a habit and

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, by charging them in cases that are needed, prevent them from repeating bad driving.