Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the bolck of flats which he owns. You should include Where you live Explain the problem What he should do

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Dear landlord, I'm writing

this

letter to ask for your assistance. The flat that I'm currently living at has become a difficult place to stay,

due to

issues with high and constant noise around the block. The flat in question is located in New York City at the Engineer's condo, apartment number 23.

That is

where I live with my wife. Some weeks ago, a family of four moved into flat 22, right next to mine.

This

family has been making a whole lot of noise since they bought a new car. They usually spend their whole weekend in the common area, with that car turned on, and its radio at maximum volume listening to some music.

This

situation has brought a high amount of stress to me and my wife;

therefore

, we cannot use our time to relax and take it easy at the weekend. The thing is, I'm hoping that, with

this

letter, you will take some action to address

such

an issue; in fact, maybe you could charge them a fee for disturbing our silence by the master deed.

Finally

, if you have any questions or concerns feel free to contact me on my mobile number 1111111111. Thank you very much. Yours faithfully, Mr Adam Jones.

Submitted by Danarvelini on Sun Nov 05 2023

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task achievement

Make sure to fully address all the required points in the task prompt. Consider providing more specific details about the noise issue and its impact on your daily life.

coherence cohesion

The overall organization of ideas is clear, and there is a logical flow in the letter. Consider using more transitional phrases to enhance the cohesion between paragraphs.

lexical resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and demonstrates a good range of words. Consider using more varied vocabulary to avoid repetition.

grammatical range

The grammatical range is generally accurate with a good control of tenses and sentence structures. Watch out for minor errors in subject-verb agreement.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

209 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Tenant
Landlord
Block of flats
Complaint
Noise problem
Ongoing
Nature
Source
Well-being
Daily life
Enforce
Insulation
Regulations
Positive resolution
Contact details

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