In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
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according to
the pace of technology, I am optimistic about the future of transportation specially
in the aspect of being driverless. Replace the word
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This
essay provides the pros and cons of this
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There will be a large number of advantages Correct your spelling
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the importance of using public Correct your spelling
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which there is no driver is not Correct your spelling
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logicalfor
them. Because, not only does it decrease the cost of providing public transportation for their citizens, but they Correct your spelling
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also
can use them non-stop. Moreover
, people will have this
opportunity to use their own car more efficiently. They will use the time that they spend in
the way between their home and their office and of Change preposition
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the time which people have been spending in the Add a comma
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However
, there is another side of the coin.
It is undeniable that it will have some drawbacks. For example
, using this
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Furthermore
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opportunity
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goals.
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conclusion
Although
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technology
producing
driverless vehicles offers many merits, it Change preposition
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a thing in the future outnumber the disadvantages.Submitted by rasulmaghsudi928 on
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- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
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