Nowadays , a lot of people enjoy watching sports on Tv . Do you think the advantages of watching sports on Tv outweigh the disadvantage?
At present, more
people
are enjoying to see
games on Verb problem
watching
television
.Many people
did
not get Wrong verb form
do
full
experience if they Add an article
the full
watches
sport on Change the verb form
watch
Tv
, therefore
I believe that,
Remove the comma
apply
benefits
of viewing Correct article usage
the benefits
sports
on television
outnumbered
the drawback.
Wrong verb form
outnumber
Firstly
, nowadays more and more people
are enjoying to watch
Change the verb form
watching
sports
on Tv
Correct your spelling
TV
due to
the fact that people
feels
happy when watching their favorite players in slo-motion on Change the verb form
feel
television
.It is so admirable if a player does a skill and will be replayed in slo-motion
, Correct your spelling
slow-motion
people
enjoys
that because sometimes it can be replayed two to three times Change the verb form
enjoy
depends
on how Wrong verb form
depending
more
Correct quantifier usage
apply
skillful
it is.Change the spelling
skilful
For example
Messi, he is a too
fast player in soccer, so most Rephrase
very
of
Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
people
cannot be satisfied if they viewing
once without playing again because sometimes the bling of an eye Wrong verb form
view
your
Correct pronoun usage
you
lost
all of it.
Wrong verb form
lose
Secondly
, most of
Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
people
are amazing when they are stares
at Correct your spelling
stare
Correct article usage
the Tv
Tv
Correct your spelling
TV
on
Change preposition
during
sports
time.There are limitations of
Change preposition
to
complains
especially when Replace the word
complaints
people
watching
different games from their homesteads, they do what they want.Wrong verb form
watch
For instance
, as for
me, I feel happy when Change preposition
apply
if
I sit in my underwear looking at Premier League matches and I can Correct word choice
apply
also
eat snacks and drinking
for Change the verb form
drink
a cheaper prices
.
Correct the article-noun agreement
a cheaper price
cheaper prices
On the other hand
, many people
do not get full experience when viewing sports
or games on television
.People
will get used to many things when they are watching sports
live for example
in a stadium, experience to
socialisation and meeting with the players in person.More Change preposition
apply
people
enjoy when they meets
Change the verb form
meet
best
players in the world Correct article usage
the best
on
World Cup matches and others Change preposition
at
they
pay Correct pronoun usage
apply
a
Remove the article
apply
such
amount
to CR7 for him to write a signature on jerseys.Viewing from the playgrounds, Correct article usage
an amount
people
also
learn even
to wait for a period of time to pee since they are long Rephrase
apply
que
for the bathroom in stadiums.
Correct your spelling
queue
queues
To conclude
, more and more people
enjoys
Change the verb form
enjoy
slo-motion
and replays when watching Correct your spelling
slow-motion
sports
on Tv
, however
they did not get some other experiences and I Add the comma(s)
however,
believed
thatWrong verb form
believe
,
Remove the comma
apply
benefits
outweigh the drawback.Correct article usage
the benefits
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