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The best way to learn English is to study with native teachers.” What do you think about this opinion? State your point and give reasons and examples to support your answer.

#english #study #teachers #point #support
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To learn
English
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, some people might argue that
poeple
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people
 can study it from non-native
teachers
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 as they might have a good level of
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. In my opinion,
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, I really do agree with the statement that learning
English
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 with native
teachers
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 is the best way to effectively improve
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skill
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, regarding that they comprehend
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how to
use
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 their language perfectly. In
English
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, there are a lot of things that we need to consider
such
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 as grammar, vocabulary, idiom, and more, so if we study
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 with native
teachers
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 they can help us to correct our mistakes when our
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 seem to be a bit awkward.
For example
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, 1 month ago,
i
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 tried to write my essay, and there were some words that
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 really
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 to describe
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in my essay, but
i
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 did not know how to express
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.
Therefore
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, I asked my non-native teacher which word I should
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, but they
also
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 felt reluctant to tell me
beacuse
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 could not figure it out
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. Afterwards, I decided to ask my native
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 at school and let
he
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gave
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 me some
advises
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, leading to
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 receiving a lot of
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 about my essays from him and understanding which vocabulary should be used in different situations.
It is clear that
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 asking for some
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 from
native
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a native
the native
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 teacher can help us to
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English
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 better. Alongside
this
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, if we try to speak
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fluent
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, studying from native
teachers
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 can help us to improve
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it quickly, by listening
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 they pronounce words or how they
use
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 some phrases.
This
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 encourages us to
use
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English
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 in a better way and improve our speaking
skill
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. In conclusion, learning
English
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 with native
teachers
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 can help us to improve
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our
English
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 skills perfectly, as they know how to
use
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 it naturally and how to correct our mistakes in using
English
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.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear topic sentence and supports the main argument. Use linking words to enhance coherence within and between paragraphs.
lexical resource
Provide more specific and varied vocabulary to demonstrate a wider range of lexical resources.
grammatical range
Pay attention to sentence structure and grammar, particularly in complex sentences, to showcase a greater range of grammatical structures.
task response
Ensure that all parts of the prompt are addressed and develop the arguments with more examples and supporting details.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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