You are getting married. Write a letter to your English speaking friend to him/her to the wedding. In your letter- describe who you are going to marry, tell what will happen on the wedding day (schedule) and explain why it is important him/her to be at the wedding

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Dear Sam, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I have

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some

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surprising news for you

that

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apply

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I am getting married next month. As you know, Karan and

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have been together

from

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for

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last

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the last

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four years.

Finally

, we made

our

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up our

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minds to get married. I wedding ceremony is going to take place at

Toronto

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the Toronto

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wedding hall on 23rd December. And

small

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reception party at your house on

following

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day. So please plan your trip

accordingly

. I will be very happy if you will join us and cherish our moments with us. I cannot wait to

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you soon. Best regards Iman

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task response

Expand on the details of the wedding day schedule and the importance of the friend's presence.

coherence cohesion

Ensure the logical progression of ideas by organizing them in paragraphs.

lexical resource

Use more varied vocabulary and expressions to enhance the lexical resource.

grammatical range

Pay attention to sentence structure and grammar to improve the grammatical range.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

101 words

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You are getting married. Write a letter to your English speaking friend to him/her to the wedding. In your letter- describe who you are going to marry, tell what will happen on the wedding day (schedule) and explain why it is important him/her to be at the wedding

Word Count

Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

Some people say that a special tax should be put on food and drinks with high levels of added sugar. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There is no doubt that globalisation has benefited the world by bringing together people, business and nations. People who criticise it stand in the way of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries today, there is an insufficient respect to old people. What are the reasons for this ? What problems might it brings to the society ?