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You are getting married. Write a letter to your English speaking friend to him/her to the wedding. In your letter- describe who you are going to marry, tell what will happen on the wedding day (schedule) and explain why it is important him/her to be at the wedding

#english #friend #letter- #schedule
Dear Sam, I hope 
this
 letter finds you well. I have
a
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some
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 surprising news for you
that
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apply
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I am getting married next month. As you know, Karan and
me
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I
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 have been together
from
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for
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last
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the last
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 four years.
Finally
, we made
our
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up our
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 minds to get married. I wedding ceremony is going to take place at
Toronto
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the Toronto
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 wedding hall on 23rd December. And
small
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a small
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 reception party at your house on
following
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the following
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 day. So please plan your trip
accordingly
. I will be very happy if you will join us and cherish our moments with us. I cannot wait to
seeing
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 you soon. Best regards Iman
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task response
Expand on the details of the wedding day schedule and the importance of the friend's presence.
coherence cohesion
Ensure the logical progression of ideas by organizing them in paragraphs.
lexical resource
Use more varied vocabulary and expressions to enhance the lexical resource.
grammatical range
Pay attention to sentence structure and grammar to improve the grammatical range.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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