The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development in the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development in the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The maps illustrate Norbiton's factory zone both in the present and in the future.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the road will be extended and new features like a bridge and a new roundabout will be added.
On the other hand
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, Factory facilities will be transformed into housing areas and new buildings will be established. A new bridge will be developed to cross the river in the north, which will end in a novel road.
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, a roundabout will be situated south of the old one. A new exit from the latter will lead to part of the expanded residential area. The fabric structures will be converted into accommodations.
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, a few more distinct zones will be included in the industrial zone, including a school and a playground on the east of the old roundabout.
In addition
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, new shops and a novel medical centre between the old and the new traffic circles, respectively from their west and their east sides.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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