The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of the
population
in the Philippines,
Malaysia
,
Thailand
, and Indonesia living in cities between 1970 and 2020, and forecast in two decades.
Overall
,
it is clear that
all four South Asian countries have experienced an increase over the past 50 years, a trend expected to continue for the next twenty years, with
Malaysia
leading
due to
its largest
population
among them.
To begin
with,
Malaysia
started at the exact 30% of the
citizens
in 1970 which
this
country
has always gradually grown in inhabitants and speculated will reach peak of
population
in 2040 at around four-fifths.
In addition
, the nearest
country
to
Malaysia
which is Indonesia started in 1970 with slightly 10% of
citizens
and has enormously surged throughout
half
of the century.
This
country
will have a top total
population
approximately in 2030 well beyond
half
,
although
projected in 2040 will slightly dip to nearly
half
.
Additionally
, the ratio of Indonesia’s urbanization intersected two times with
Thailand
in around 2000 and the Philippines in nearly 2010, approximately nearly a third and almost two-fifths of the
population
, respectively. Turning to
Thailand
in 1970 had a
population
of just under 20%;
however
, fluctuated from roughly 1980 to about 2020.
Moreover
,
Thailand
is forecasted to escalate in the next fifth century with the peak of its urbanization in 2040 with nearly
half
of the inhabitants. As regards to Philipines had well over 30% of the total
population
,
then
by nearly 1990 the
citizens
of
this
country
considerably jumped to well beneath 50%, but experienced a diminished to almost two-fifths.
Nevertheless
, the number of the Philippines’ total
citizens
started to increase in about 2020
also
speculated to extend to the highest
population
in 2040 with almost a
half
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, malaysia, thailand, citizens, country, half with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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