Doctors, Nurses, and teachers make a great contribution to society and should be payed more than entertainment and sport celebrities. Do you agree or disagree ?

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leisure

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and physical activity field are getting more money than

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healthcare professionals and tutors.I completely agree with the above statement.

This

essay

ellaborates

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elaborates

on why doctors,

teachers

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and teachers

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should be paid more than

the

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celebrities.

Health care

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Healthcare

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professionals

such

as doctors and nurses contribute to

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society by improving the quality of

health

,

by

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curing

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disease

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and

also

to provide a healthy lifestyle .They aim to improve a

persons

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mental and physical

health

so that they can have

good

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a good

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healthy long life.

For instance

, An oncologist who cured Rahul who was suffering from cancer for two years gets

a

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average salary of one lakh a month but an actor

such

as

abishek

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gets five crores for a movie which entertains us for two hours.

On the other hand

, celebrities from entertainment

such

as movies, song albums ,

pod cast

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podcasts

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et cetera and famous people in sports like football, cricket,

hockey

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and hockey

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provide to the community but they

dont

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don't

make a change in

ones

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life .

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, Mr.

sachin

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Sachin

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who plays cricket for the nation won awards and is paid in crores for one game

where

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as

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whereas

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a teacher who teaches a student

a

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from a

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young age till he graduates gets a salary of an average

twenty

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of twenty

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thousand per month.

To conclude

,

health

care professionals and teachers spend their time to make a

persons

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life better,

hence

society becomes good .

Therefore

they should be paid more than

the

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entertainment and

sport

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celebrities.