THE CHART BELOW SHOWS INFIRMATION ABOUT CHANGES IN AVERAGE HOUSE PRICES IN FIVE DIFFERENT CITIES BETWEEN 1990 AND 2002 COMPARED WITH THE AVERAGE PRICES IN 1989
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illustrate
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illustrates
about
how the Change preposition
apply
cost
of accomodation
changes Correct your spelling
accommodation
among
five cities from 1990 to 2002 compared with the Change preposition
in
cost
in 1989. Overall
, the only country which
the Change preposition
in which
accomodation
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accommodation
price
declined was Frankfrut Fix the agreement mistake
prices
while
other
four countries seem to have Correct article usage
the other
increasing
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increased
cost
of the houses in almost one and a half decade
. Fix the agreement mistake
decades
Furthermore
, London shows the
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a
dramatically
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dramatic
change
for
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in
the
price.
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apply
change
of
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in
accomodations
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accommodations
accommodation
cost
in Correct subject-verb agreement
costs
Frankfrut
shows the Correct your spelling
Frankfurt
decline
trend that Change the verb form
declining
explained
during the half of 1995, the rate reached approximately 3% Add a missing verb
is explained
while
in
1996 to 2000 it decreased Change preposition
from
around
1%. Change preposition
from around
However
, this
was different from other countries such
as New york
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York
10
% rate of positive Correct article usage
a 10
change
, Madrid got approximately 1% more changed
, Tokyo rose to 2.5% Wrong verb form
change
of
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apply
change
and London had the highest different
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difference
cost
of houses which increased between 1990 to 1995 with 1996 to 2002.
As the highest change
rate of the house, in
1996 to 2002 London Change preposition
from
reach
almost 12% which shows 15% Wrong verb form
reached
percent
of changes compared to Change the spelling
per cent
Frankfrut
as the lowest in the period of time.Correct your spelling
Frankfurt
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