The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagrams illustrate the difference of the public library between 20 years ago and nowadays.

Overall

, the library experienced a massive redesign.

It is clear that

not only the seats and tables were removed, but

also

the space for reading news and magazines were been cancelled. Looking at the diagram more closely, one can see that the area of adult fiction is moved to the right-hand side of the floor, which is between the area for lectures and the coffee shop.

In addition

, the space for children replaces the

room

for media resources and adds two sections of the sofa,

while

its space is now used by people interested in lectures.

Moreover

, there are new areas for inquiry services and

automatic-equipment

Correct your spelling

automatic equipment

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helps people deal with their questions.

Also

, the computer

room

in the corner overtakes the place where the reading

room

, which

Add a missing verb

is, which

show examples

is in front of the all-reference

room

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Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Topic Vocabulary:

floor plan
public library
layout
reading area
computer station
multimedia section
children's area
reference section
study cubicles
shelving units
digital media
technological advancements
user behavior
accessibility
traffic flow
modernization
community needs
conversion
allocation
removal

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