The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

The diagrams illustrate the difference of the public library between 20 years ago and nowadays.

Overall

Linking Words

, the library experienced a massive redesign.

It is clear that

Linking Words

not only the seats and tables were removed, but

also

Linking Words

the space for reading news and magazines were been cancelled. Looking at the diagram more closely, one can see that the area of adult fiction is moved to the right-hand side of the floor, which is between the area for lectures and the coffee shop.

In addition

Linking Words

, the space for children replaces the

room

Use synonyms

for media resources and adds two sections of the sofa,

while

Linking Words

its space is now used by people interested in lectures.

Moreover

Linking Words

, there are new areas for inquiry services and

automatic-equipment

Correct your spelling

automatic equipment

show examples

helps people deal with their questions.

Also

Linking Words

, the computer

room

Use synonyms

in the corner overtakes the place where the reading

room

Use synonyms

, which

Add a missing verb

is, which

show examples

is in front of the all-reference

room

Use synonyms

vincent3725416Mon Nov 06 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

▼

Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

▼

Vocabulary: Replace the words room with synonyms.

▼

Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 2 times.

▼

Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

▼

6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

150 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

floor plan
public library
layout
reading area
computer station
multimedia section
children's area
reference section
study cubicles
shelving units
digital media
technological advancements
user behavior
accessibility
traffic flow
modernization
community needs
conversion
allocation
removal

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7
band
'It is often argued that children must be protected from unsuitable material on TV and the Internet by government censorship. Others say that this is the parents' responsibility to control what their children do and watch. To what extent do you think that this is true?
The protection of children from inappropriate content on TV and the Internet is a contentious issue, with some advocating for government censorship while others emphasize parental responsibility. While both viewpoints have their merits, I agree to a large extent with the argument for government intervention.
6
band
Some people say that it is possible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree
It is debated whether a country can balance economic success with environmental sustainability. Some argue that economic growth and a clean atmosphere coexist through modernity and that the pursuit of profit inevitably leads to environmental degradation.
7.5
band
The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?
E-commerce is increasingly becoming popular among certain demographics of society. There is a notion that one day all physical stores will end their operations. This essay will argue why onsite shopping will be functional besides the advancements in e-shopping.
7.5
band
Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's character and culture from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
The statement that one can figure out a person's character and cultural background through their clothing choices is a topic of considerable debate. I agree that a human’s choice of clothes can often reflect aspects of their character and culture.
7.5
band
People now overuse technology, which induces negative effects, do you agree or disagree?
It’s argued that people now overuse technology, which induces negative effects. While I agree with the idea of excessive use of technology, I do believe there are many benefits and conveniences brought by technology, as long as it is applied properly.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

'It is often argued that children must be protected from unsuitable material on TV and the Internet by government censorship. Others say that this is the parents' responsibility to control what their children do and watch. To what extent do you think that this is true?

Some people say that it is possible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree

The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's character and culture from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

People now overuse technology, which induces negative effects, do you agree or disagree?