The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate the difference of the public library between 20 years ago and nowadays.
Overall
, the library experienced a massive redesign. Linking Words
It is clear that
not only the seats and tables were removed, but Linking Words
also
the space for reading news and magazines were been cancelled.
Looking at the diagram more closely, one can see that the area of adult fiction is moved to the right-hand side of the floor, which is between the area for lectures and the coffee shop. Linking Words
In addition
, the space for children replaces the Linking Words
room
for media resources and adds two sections of the sofa, Use synonyms
while
its space is now used by people interested in lectures.
Linking Words
Moreover
, there are new areas for inquiry services andLinking Words
automatic-equipment
helps people deal with their questions. Correct your spelling
automatic equipment
Also
, the computer Linking Words
room
in the corner overtakes the place where the reading Use synonyms
room
Use synonyms
, which
is in front of the all-reference Add a missing verb
is, which
room
.Use synonyms
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