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Some people believe that corporal punishment helps to improve students' behavior, while others think it could be detrimental in many ways. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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A few people think that since some kids find arithmetic and philosophy tough, they could be voluntary
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 attention
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 their treasured
subjects
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To begin
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subjects
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 he or she has more interest in. The kid who begins to learn different academic books will be able to discern perfectly without looking
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 External Guidance. Discovery of Talent at a very early stage can be aided by giving the
younglets
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youngsters
 the
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 to have a bite of all the available
subjects
.
for example
. A student may think he loves and is good with mathematics , but
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 a biological class
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once or twice discovers that he has more interest in studying
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nature and living things . It's better to allow a child to discover his or her talents by attaining some quest .
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 it will be good to say that children who are not restricted to one subject at the beginning of
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their
 education do
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 to have basic knowledge which they carry on
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 their basic lifestyle once they become an adult.
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ability. in my opinion, I disagree that
subjects
 should be optional though there will be a need for specialization at a later stage .
beginers
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beginners
 in a field at their early stages should be given chances to have experience of all the important subject-Line.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • corporal punishment
  • deterrent
  • undesirable behavior
  • discipline
  • respect for authority
  • disruptive behaviors
  • conducive learning environment
  • judiciously
  • reinforce
  • boundaries
  • psychological effects
  • increased aggression
  • anxiety
  • cycle of violence
  • physical aggression
  • abuse
  • discrimination
  • unevenly
  • biases
  • resentment
  • positive reinforcement
  • counseling
  • behavioral interventions
  • self-control
  • decision-making skills
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