the provided bar chart illustrates how many peoole drinked coffe and bought tea as well as drinking habits in five Australian towns.
The graph displays the results of
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a survey
the survey
coffee
and tea
buying and drinking habits
in five
cities
of Australia (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Horbart
) in Correct your spelling
Hobart
last
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the last
four
weeks
. The data are given by percentage.
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the last
four
weeks
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most of
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citizens
five
cities
of Australia went to a cafe or tea
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buying
coffe
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coffee
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coffee
tea
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habits
in the last
month is brought
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coffee
to go.
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habit
four
of five
cities
of Australia (Sydney, Melourne
, Brisbane, and Hobart) in the Correct your spelling
Melbourne
last
four
weeks
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cafe
for Add an article
a cafe
the cafe
coffe
or Correct your spelling
coffee
tea
with more than 55%. Meanwhile, in Adelaide, bought
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coffee
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others
habits
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cities
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buying
coffee
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the last
four
weeks
. Furthermore
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