The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The map above illustrates the changes
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floor
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scheme in a central
library
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between 20 years ago and how it looks in the present days
Overall
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, it can be seen that all sections of a
library
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have been transformed extensively. New local facilities
such
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as a cafe and lecture
room
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were added Chairs and Tables were removed from the hall to an old computer
room
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In the past, the
library
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layout primarily consisted of distinct sections for CDs, videos,
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computer games, children's books, adult fiction, adult non-fiction, a reading
room
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, and designated spaces for newspapers, magazines, and seating areas. Visitors accessed the
library
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through a central entrance.
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, in the present floor plan, substantial changes have been implemented. The layout now incorporates a storytelling area, an expanded collection of children's fiction books, a separate section dedicated to reference materials, an enquiry desk facilitating various services including ticket issuance and book returns, a lecture
room
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, an information desk specifically for adult fiction, self-service machines, a computer
room
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, and the inclusion of a café.
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, the current
library
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ambiance
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has evolved to offer comfortable sofas for patrons and attendees of storytelling events. The entrance,
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still a pivotal access point, now provides access to a wider range of amenities and services
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • modern technology
  • computer stations
  • multimedia room
  • multi-purpose spaces
  • conference rooms
  • study spaces
  • community-oriented services
  • accessibility
  • wider aisles
  • ramps
  • designated areas
  • people with disabilities
  • cafeteria
  • coffee shop
  • leisurely space
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