The graph shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007

The graph shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007
The line chart displays the usage of three spreads for bread, there are
margarine
, low fat & reduced spreads, and
butter
, from 1981 to 2007 per five years.
Overall
, their trends fluctuate but they tend to fall
at the end
of year range. Starting in 1981 with around 90
grams
margarine
had lower
consumption
than
butter
which had around 50
grams
over it. In the following 5 years,
butter
reached a peak with almost 160
grams
of usage.
Besides
margarine
consumption
declined by about 10
grams
. Interestingly, in 1991
margarine
and
butter
were consumed in similar amounts, around 100
grams
, where
butter
sharply plummeted and
margarine
went up. In 1996 a new spread variant appeared, low fat and reduced spreads, with around 10
grams
consumption
at initial. At that time,
margarine
became the most common spread to eat. In 2001, low fat & reduced spreads ate the same as
margarine
.
Then
, in 2007 three of them plunged with
consumption
for each spread: 40
grams
margarine
, 50
grams
butter
, and 70
grams
low fat and reduced spreads.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words margarine, butter, grams, consumption with synonyms.
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  • consumption
  • spreads
  • increased
  • decreased
  • stable
  • significantly
  • approximately
  • per capita
  • remarkable
  • peaked
  • experienced
  • started
  • remained
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