The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year 2016

The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year 2016
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The pie charts demonstrate the partition of income and outcome for the children’s non-profit movement in the USA in 2016. Generally, the amount of spending money is smaller, which is $53,224,896 than the earning, $53,561,580, or
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, the return is $336,684. The majority source for
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act was food, where people tended to give their food, reaching 86.6% of all the revenue in 2016. It was followed by donations from the community around 10.4%. The charity
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profited from its program by 2.3%. The grants from the government and revenue from investment contributed a similar amount, 0.2%. And several incomes that were combined into one, 0.4%.
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, the expenditures of charity are only divided into three categories, that are: program services, fundraising, and management and general. Just like the main name of
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chart, the act for voluntary became the highest paying out for, up to 95.8%. The other types were appealing funds with 2.6% and management and common things, 1.8%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • donations
  • grants
  • fundraising events
  • expenditure
  • administration costs
  • program expenses
  • direct benefits
  • indirect benefits
  • underprivileged children
  • education
  • healthcare
  • shelter
  • nourishment
  • medical treatments
  • basic needs
  • financial sustainability
  • transparency
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