The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year 2016
The pie charts demonstrate the partition of income and outcome for the children’s non-profit movement in the USA in 2016. Generally, the amount of spending money is smaller, which is $53,224,896 than the earning, $53,561,580, or
in other words
, the return is $336,684.
The majority source for this
act was food, where people tended to give their food, reaching 86.6% of all the revenue in 2016. It was followed by donations from the community around 10.4%. The charity also
profited from its program by 2.3%. The grants from the government and revenue from investment contributed a similar amount, 0.2%. And several incomes that were combined into one, 0.4%. Besides
, the expenditures of charity are only divided into three categories, that are: program services, fundraising, and management and general. Just like the main name of this
chart, the act for voluntary became the highest paying out for, up to 95.8%. The other types were appealing funds with 2.6% and management and common things, 1.8%.Submitted by iftitakhulzakiyah on
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