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The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.

The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.
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The chart compares the
number
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 of individuals using mobile
phones
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 and
landlines
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 across seven selected countries, including Canada, the US, Germany,
Denmark
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, the UK, Sweden, and Italy.
Overall
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, what stands out from the bar chart is that the highest mobile phone usage is observed in Italy. Another notable point is that the
number
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 of
landlines
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 used in
Denmark
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 exceeds that of the other six countries. The top four countries' phone usage are
Denmark
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, UK, Sweden, and Italy, with over 80
citizens
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, around 85
citizens
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, over 85
citizens
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 and 90
citizens
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 respectively. Meanwhile, the figures for
landlines
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 in the UK and Sweden are slightly lower than the
number
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 of mobile
phones
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, just below 60 and around 70 respectively.
However
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,
this
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 statistic for Italy is significantly lower, accounting for nearly half the
number
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 of
phones
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, at approximately 42.
On the other hand
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,
Denmark
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 sees a reversed trend, residents using
landlines
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 are higher, just below 90
people
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. During the same time frame, the respective
number
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 of
people
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 using
phones
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 in Canada, US and Germany are only 39, under 50 and around 70. As for
landlines
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, Canada and US have witnessed a rapidly higher
number
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, over 60
people
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 and around 70
people
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,
in contrast
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, the
number
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 allocated to
land lines
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landlines
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 in Germany is lower, at only 60
people
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, phones, landlines, denmark, citizens, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
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