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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.

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The alterations that an
airport
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 will go through in the following year are illustrated in the given layouts.
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, it is apparent that by
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next year
site
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 of the
airport
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 will have changed dramatically. The most prominent change will be the addition of a number of gates on the northernmost part of the
airport
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. The current layout of the
airport
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 has a cylindrical shape. There are eight gates surrounding the northern
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walkway
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, which is in a square shape chamber. On the departure
site
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, security and
passport
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control
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 are located. Just below the
passport
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control
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, on the right corner, a café is available. On the western part of the departure
site
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, check-in is placed. By the following year, the plan of the
airport
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 will have altered sweepingly. A “Y” shape area is supposed to be developed on the north part of the
airport
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, which
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would be surrounded by 18 gates with sky trains in the middle. Shops are anticipated to be built above security and
passport
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control
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. The café location will be replaced with check-in and a new facility named bag drop will be added to the previous location of check-in. On the arrival
site
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 of the future
airport
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,
passport
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control
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 customs will remain unaltered, but a brand-new café, ATM, and car hire will be extended on the right side of the arrival section.
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introduction conclusion present
Ensure the introduction sets the context for the information presented and that a clear conclusion summarizes the main transformations adequately.
logical structure
Organize information logically, using paragraphs to separate distinct features for clarity.
supported main points
Support main points with enough detail, focusing on the most significant changes and using comparative language effectively.
complete response
Be sure to provide a complete response by covering all major developments depicted in the plans without omitting crucial information.
clear comprehensive ideas
Present ideas clearly and comprehensively by elaborating on how the airport's layout changes, avoiding ambiguity and ensuring full comprehension.
relevant specific examples
Include relevant and specific examples to clearly illustrate the changes, making use of the information provided in the prompts.

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