The charts show the average levels of participation and the highest education level of adults from 2000 to 2010 in Singapore. Write at least 150 words!
The bar graph illustrates
an
average number of Correct article usage
the
years
spent at school between adult
males and females
in Singapore from 2000 to 2010, while
the pie chart provides an information
about the highest Remove the article
information
a piece of information
education
level
of adults over the period given. Overall
, adult
males was
higher than Change the verb form
were
females
in average levels of participation in education
, and the highest percentage
education
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of education
level
was in highschool
Correct your spelling
high school
qualification
in 2000 and master
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master's
qualification
in 2010.
With regards to the bar graph, in 2000, an
average number of Correct article usage
the
adult
males was higher than adult
females
approximately 9 years
. There was a slight increase in 2010 at about 11.5 years
. Moreover
, the average number of adult
females
was 8 years
in 2000 and 2002. Additionally
, it was slightly increased in 2010 at 8.5%
Regarding the pie chart, in 2000, the highest percentage
in education
level
was in highschool
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high school
qualification
at 32.13%, whereas
the secondary school qualification
was at 26.3%. In contrast
, master
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master's
qualification
and university qualification
were in the lowest percentage
at just 7.5 and 8.3% respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
However
, there is
a significant change in the highest Wrong verb form
was
education
level
of adults in 2010. The highest percentage
was in the university qualification
at 32.93%, and the master qualification
was slightly different at 30.31%. The lowest percentage
was in primary qualification
at just 2.1%.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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