The bar chart below shows the number of overseas students enrolled in a second year Graphic Design course at a college in the south of England. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.

The bar chart below shows the number of overseas students enrolled in a second year Graphic Design course at a college in the south of England.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.
The bar chart vividly depicts the number of male and female students enrolled in two various country graphic design courses at colleges in South of England from France, Sweden, Germany, Spain and
Syria
. From the
overall
analysis, it is readily apparent that the majority of
males
preferred to take admission in Computer-aided design
whereas
,
females
chose photography in most Nations. Surprisingly, in
Syria
females
only enrolled in photography and
males
had an equal sum of admission in both courses. By scanning the details, enrollment in CAD, in France figure of entrance were 4 in male and 2 in female similar trend was observed in Germany 3 and 1 respectively.
Moreover
, the statistic for male students was threefold that of female students in Sweden Spain has a significant difference in sum 6 in
males
and only one in
females
.
On the other hand
, in
Syria
counterpart to
this
train, the total enrollment doubled for
females
as compared to
males
.
Furthermore
, photography core option, France, Germany and Sweden illustrate a similar trend in which the sum of
females
was twice and thrice in comparison to men. In Spain, the numbers were slightly the same for both genders. Interestingly, in
Syria
, women were not interested in look confirmation and only one male was enrolled
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Vocabulary: Replace the words syria, males, females with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • overseas students
  • enrolled
  • Graphic Design course
  • trends
  • fluctuations
  • steady increase/decrease
  • significant
  • minor changes
  • enrollment
  • popular
  • diverse nationalities
  • academic year
  • compared to
  • dominate
  • in contrast
  • percentage
  • proportion
  • visual representation
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