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Country and Overseas have sharply increased over the years from 37 jumps to 60 in UK minutes in 2002.

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The bar chart illustrates the total of
minutes
 spent on telephone communication in the UK in three categories namely local – fixed line, domestic and international – fixed line, and mobile (calls ) from 1995 to 2002. There was a dynamic expansion and decrease in the volume of local-fixed lines, which in 1995 from 70 to 89
minutes
while
 it grew particularly high, peaking in 1999
with
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 90
minutes
 and gradually decreasing after 1999-2002.
On the other hand
, both Domestic and international-fixed lines
also
 mobile (all calls) consist of enhanced all of the year. Country and Overseas have sharply increased over the years from 37 jumps to 60 in the UK
minutes
 in 2002. Same conditions with the digital sector which have seen a strong increase from 3 to 44 in
minutes
 calling in the UK between 1995 and 2002.
Overall
, the local communication type still led the market for a whole year. The next option is talking by
fixed-line
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nation
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 and overseas, and
last
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digital
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 phone.
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